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    Quote Originally Posted by drgyji View Post
    Ok, this is the plot of for a story which I thought up a few months ago.
    I don't actually intend to write it (at least not now), but I want to know what your opinions are, and would you read a story with this plot.
    Btw in my opinion I think this story is messed up.
    Here it is:

    The main character lives with his mother, because his parents are divorced, he has a best friend, and overall he is a normal person.
    Ten years later, he lives an independent life which is, also quite a pathetic one.
    One day, he gets an invitation to his mother's wedding as she is getting remarried.
    "But, to who?" He thinks, as it is not stated on the invite.
    The day of the wedding comes up and he arrives, shocked.
    The person who is the Groom,
    the person who is marrying his mother,
    the person who will be his new father,
    is...
    His childhood best friend?!?!
    This is my first time reading something like this, I'm not a fan of "age gap" relationships but this caught my attention. I would like to see the continuation. Btw, what are the Genres of this story? If you don't mind me asking.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KeiichiMamoru View Post
    This is my first time reading something like this, I'm not a fan of "age gap" relationships but this caught my attention. I would like to see the continuation. Btw, what are the Genres of this story? If you don't mind me asking.
    Hmm... I'm not quite sure ,but I think the genres would be:
    Comedy, Romance (because of the mom and best friend), slice of life and (maybe) drama.
    I thought I should write something here....

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    Hey guys... I need a plot for a new story... anyone? Any plot at all...
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    ...well..uhm..my next story is about a girl longing for her recently died loved-one(well its her bf)..then..what should i write next..please give some ideas...

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    @naka... well it depends where you specialize... but as much as possible... write a story partaining to yourself or just put yourself as a side-character in the story... you'll be able to make plots right away easily...

    And I need a plot myself... I kinda run out...
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    to thank you for giving me an idea..i'll give you one too...uhm...why dont you try this idea out..

    a fallen angel(girl) needs to accomplish some missions to go back to heaven..and a black angel is assigned to ruin her plam\ns..and they fall inlove which is prohibited....^_^

    i dont know if that is good..^_^

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    nakahara!! ^^
    Here's a plot for you!:
    how about if that girl found some one who resembles a lot of his bf.
    they got to know each other, they get along and had fun time together,
    then the boy found out that the girl had a bf who looked like him died.
    he thought that the girl was just using him to remember her bf.
    but he didn't knew that the girl had a better view of him ,falls for him and sees him as a different person now.

    the two had distance with each other.
    the boy had a girl,
    The girl. was left cold.
    the boy quietly observes the girl from afar, and he's not liking the girl's sudden depression.

    as the story goes the girl moved to another place. and after a year they've met again.
    (here's for you to continue, if you like it though)

    hohoho~ i overdid it.
    just a suggestion anyways teehee... ^^.
    just wanna share my good mood for today hehe.

    just finished writing another story, (my 4th novel, yeah!)
    ima post another story after ... 3 weeks maybe.
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    I don't have many readers now do I...

    O_O
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    ..thank you Yano for that wonderful idea!.. ^_^ hey, if you need any help just post your message on my profile..thank you again^_^

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    I hope my idea helps XD

    anyways, i've been hesitating to post a new story since i haven't finished uploading "Picture Perfect" here.
    will it be alright if i post a different story the same time I'm posting "PP" ?
    or should i wait til i finish "PP" on this site.

    i think ima need your opinion about that.
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    ..well..it depends on you..if you want to post another story..but be sure to finish PP..^_^

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    I have a question... Who is following ANY of my stories O_O
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    yeah, definitely ill finish it ^^
    oh... well, i guess i should focus on "PP" more...

    inspiration's back :3
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    I'm being ignored O_O am I?
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    @zen yoh! teehee. sori zen, my net is so slow right now that i didnt see you posting before me.
    ^^ you got a lot of views anyway, i think there's a lot of people here who love your story.
    -mine only have 150+ views in the past 1 week that i started posting T___T hope i can catch up with the other entries.
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    yeah yano's right zen..you have a lot of readers^_^....
    maybe they just dont like to post a review but they read your story that really matters....^_^

    zen,you are th most popular story writer here in OS..^_^..
    i dont think that you dont have any followers^_^

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    What story would be good in an action genre

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    well i have a problem i can't focus my mind on a story so i tend to make a lot of story 0__0 and i am always behind in my deadlines orz. so i need some solutions in my problems ;__;

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    Quote Originally Posted by zevlag21 View Post
    well i have a problem i can't focus my mind on a story so i tend to make a lot of story 0__0 and i am always behind in my deadlines orz. so i need some solutions in my problems ;__;
    That's good... extending the range of your story...

    The mind not need to focus on one particular story...

    Just imagine a world with your characters and you are god of that world (not that people worship you or anything...)

    So you put those characters into different scenes or situations... and that's how I make my stories...

    Hope this helps...

    Oh... and thanks for the encouragement you guys *bows*

    But I still want comments... Because it's easy for someone to misclick the link and the only way to prove that someone did read my story is through a review or a comment... so that's all I'm after...

    I'm the most popular writer in OS hm?... I thought it was Zev... or Nakahara...
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    Quote Originally Posted by ZenNaari View Post
    That's good... extending the range of your story...

    The mind not need to focus on one particular story...

    Just imagine a world with your characters and you are god of that world (not that people worship you or anything...)

    So you put those characters into different scenes or situations... and that's how I make my stories...

    Hope this helps...

    Oh... and thanks for the encouragement you guys *bows*

    But I still want comments... Because it's easy for someone to misclick the link and the only way to prove that someone did read my story is through a review or a comment... so that's all I'm after...

    I'm the most popular writer in OS hm?... I thought it was Zev... or Nakahara...
    thank you Zen and i don't think i am that popular.

    and i suddenly thought of something why don't we make an OS writers collaboration story 0__0 ? well i think it will be fun X3

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