Review and Comments for "Your Journey" and "What happened to Us?"
Hey guys, it's me Argetlahm.
I've written both "Your Journey" and "What Happened to Us?" Actually, I haven't finished writing "Your Journey" and it's gonna take long. Hahahaha, anyways I wanna know what you guys think about my writing style and my stories. I'll make sure to improve on any area that I might need to improve on.