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    Post your reviews and comments for "The End of the Beginning" by zoeyfreeze here.

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    Odette, Claire, Lacey and Skye ~~ even though im not yet sure who's the one narrating or the MC or the one who sights the story. Quite good so far, cant yet decide though since its still on going gunna wait for the next chapter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by StrawHatPJCD View Post
    Odette, Claire, Lacey and Skye ~~ even though im not yet sure who's the one narrating or the MC or the one who sights the story. Quite good so far, cant yet decide though since its still on going gunna wait for the next chapter.
    Hi StrawHat. Thank you for your review of the story so far. the person telling the story is Odette there will be one or two characters told by Skye much late on in the story, hopefully you will be able to tell as the story progresses. Hope to hear from you soon.

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