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    Default Please read my book

    Hey so i started writing a book called Legion of the Inferno. it's the first time ive written anything so i want to know how it is.

    I only have the prologue and the first three chapters done right now but i wanted to see how it's doing so far.

    I put it the file on a website because it was easier than typing everything and making it fit the word count requirments.

    http://trentonstories.weebly.com

    please tell me what you think about it in this thread

    And i put it in this thread just cause i feel like these are read a bit more

    THANKS
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    I think I will read that when I have time

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    I'll check it out later :3

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    wow taco! goodjob! nice work of art! just done reading your book! 54ms word pages!

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    hmmmm... gonna check this out later.. the title seems interesting..

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    the whole book is based off of the OS and and the OS group the legion of the inferno

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    I'm currently downloading it right now

    so i'm planning to read this later I'm excited for shinda and sora hehe <:

    and also i've visit the website, you really did a great job for this book :))

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    Woah :D nice..

    I'll read it soon... finally I found something to kill my free time :D

    Nice idea btw :D
    Keep Calm And Troll On

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    Thanks bro, its not a very long book, but i really enjoyed writing it. But i will give you a heads up. my first three chapters arent written very well

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    Link not working :/ I was ready to read it ._. 3 years apart already have you made another book?


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    Quote Originally Posted by PerkZ View Post
    Link not working :/ I was ready to read it ._. 3 years apart already have you made another book?
    wow its been so long i didnt think this would get attention again haha. here is an updated link for you. it has everything ive written

    http://trentonstories.weebly.com

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    ohh you have a book thats great...
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