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My own piece of poem

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animefreak11
on 05-12-2011 at 05:23 PM (233 Views)
It's really hard to bear
this feelings I felt inside
my heart aches as it tears
but these feelings I must not hide

I thought everything will be alright
when I confess it to you
but then I loose my might
when you shut your heart adieu

I know I did my best
in having the guts to tell the truth
I'm now contented and I find rest
cuz it's all gone now, the feeling that is the root

Now your with another girl
and It's pretty painful to see
the both of you happy as you twirl
but still hoping to be you and me


I write poems especially when im sad
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  1. midori24's Avatar
    midori24 - 05-13-2011 03:22 AM
    nice :) i can relate to it ... create more poems ... can i use some of ur lines as my status?? :D
  2. animefreak11's Avatar
    animefreak11 - 05-13-2011 09:31 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by midori24
    nice :) i can relate to it ... create more poems ... can i use some of ur lines as my status?? :D
    sure midori i have lots of poems i'll post it some other time hey can i add you yay:3
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    animefreak11 - 05-13-2011 09:44 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by midori24
    nice :) i can relate to it ... create more poems ... can i use some of ur lines as my status?? :D
    sure midori i have lots of poems i'll post it some other time hey can i add you yay:3
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    notanotaku - 05-13-2011 11:20 AM
    Quite a nice poem :) Looking forward to another one