AOICity
08-18-2011, 01:42 AM
This is my first story I ever published online, just so you know.
Note: I do not know how the Japan Middle School System works so in the story the school is like an North American highschool.
Genres: Shounen, Action, School Life, Comedy (About the same comedy as Naruto)
Characters
A- Kenta Jitsugen
Fights w/ Sword
Trait: Intelligence
O- Masato Tsuyoishi
Fights w/ Fists
Trait: Strength
I- Satoshi Sosha
Fights w/Grappling Hooks
Trait: Skill
Kenta, Masato, and Satoshi were subjected to bullying in there 6th grade year of school so they decide to train with a mysterious man who goes by the name of Hiro. They train with him for 3 months. Although the training was difficult the result has paid off. With their new abilities, the three decide to create a group that can standup for others. This team is known as "AOI".
Episode 1: I Will Not Stand For This!
Kenta, Masato, and Satoshi are walking to there first day of junior high together.
Masato: What do you mean I have to buy lunch!
Satoshi: I already told you... You showed up last so you have to suffer the consequences.
Masato: It still doesn't make sense when did I agree to this!
Kenta starts to remember his last year and how he was bullied.
Bully 1: Hey get out of way dweeb!
Bully 2: We actually have something to do with our lives!
Kenta resolved for things to be different this year...
When the trio arrive at school, Kazuo (someone who bullied Kenta) was hosting a kendo tournament to see if anyone could beat him.
Kazuo: Hello everyone. For those of you who don't know me I am the great nephew of kendo legend Yamamoto Kishida. I'll crush anyone in kendo just signup for the tournament!
Masato: What a spoiled brat he had to pay the school to let him host this. Hey Kenta why don't you join?
Kenta: N-No it's okay I'd rather not attract any attention. Hahaha!
Satoshi: Well we should be headed to the auditorium. The ceremony will be starting soon.
After the welcoming ceremony everyone are given there times tables. Masato and Satoshi share the same home room class together so they part from Kenta. As soon as they leave two guys start to pick on Kenta.
Bully 1: Well, well, well. Looks like are old friend Kenta came to Touitsu Academy.
Bully 2: Shi,shi,shi It's a while before classes start lets have a little fun.
Daisuke: Hey cut him some slack its the first day of school.
Bully 2: Whatever.
The bullies walk away.
Kenta: Thank you, Senpai!
Daisuke: No problem, just don't let yourself get bullied so easily. Well, see ya!
Kenta: Yeah...
In math class, Kenta and Satoshi's teacher gives the class a test to see what level they are at.
Classmate 1: To think we would have it easy on the first day...
Classmate 2: Why do we have to do this its 3 pages long!
Kenta finishes the test perfectly in 2 minutes leaving everyone shocked.
The trio finally reunites and hurry towards the cafeteria because they wasted time when Masato forgot his book. They then see Yukio (someone who also got bullied in their old school) some guys who usually hanged around Kazuo threaten Yukio to sign up for the tournament or they will beat him up.
Bully 3: Hey Yukio! Signup or we'll beat you up!
Yukio: O-Okay...
Bully 4: Ha, these loser always give into you so easily.
Masato: Let's see people give into you when I kick your-
Kenta: Wait!
Masato: What now?
Kenta: I..I have an idea!
Masato: Well I'll leave it to you then.
After school the tournament begins. Kazuo is defeating every opponent with ease. Some of the opponents were people who were bullied in Kenta's old school.
Announcer: This raises Kazuo's record to 30-0.
Student 1: Wow. He's so good.
Student 2: Well his uncle is a kendoka.
Finally it is Yukio's turn and he is shaking.
Announcer: Alright let's begin! 3! 2! 1-
???: Hold it!
Announcer: Hmm?
A person in wearing a mask appears wielding a bamboo sword.
Student 3: Who is that?!?!?
Student 1: He looks sorta cool...
Kazuo: Ha! It's just some nerd who thinks he's a superhero. Who are you?
???: I am "A".
Kazuo: What kind of name is-
A: Are you proud beating people that don't even practice kendo! Your a disgrace to kendouka and if your uncle is a real kendouka he would agree with me!
Kazuo: Shut up!
Kazuo gets mad and attacks A with rage. A begins to remember all his kendo training and also the bullying he has experienced.
A: I'll finish this quickly. Form 1...PERFECT CUT!
The two clash. Kazuo's sword is split in half. Then Kazuo realized his gear was also cut right to the skin.
A: You have been defeated end this tournament.
A lot of people begin clap for him but then a teacher comes in.
Math Teacher: What going on!?!?
Just when the teacher is about to console the masked person the room goes pitch black and when they come back on the mask person was gone. Then the masked person is on the roof with Masato and Satoshi who were the ones who caused the blackout.
Masato: I personally think I would have done a better but good job!
A is then revealed as Kenta (obviously!!!)
Preview- "The boys over hear some gang members threatening Shinsuke. What has he gotten himself into? It's up to the team to save him! Next Episode: We Are AOI!"
End
Well I did my best please C&C!
Note: I do not know how the Japan Middle School System works so in the story the school is like an North American highschool.
Genres: Shounen, Action, School Life, Comedy (About the same comedy as Naruto)
Characters
A- Kenta Jitsugen
Fights w/ Sword
Trait: Intelligence
O- Masato Tsuyoishi
Fights w/ Fists
Trait: Strength
I- Satoshi Sosha
Fights w/Grappling Hooks
Trait: Skill
Kenta, Masato, and Satoshi were subjected to bullying in there 6th grade year of school so they decide to train with a mysterious man who goes by the name of Hiro. They train with him for 3 months. Although the training was difficult the result has paid off. With their new abilities, the three decide to create a group that can standup for others. This team is known as "AOI".
Episode 1: I Will Not Stand For This!
Kenta, Masato, and Satoshi are walking to there first day of junior high together.
Masato: What do you mean I have to buy lunch!
Satoshi: I already told you... You showed up last so you have to suffer the consequences.
Masato: It still doesn't make sense when did I agree to this!
Kenta starts to remember his last year and how he was bullied.
Bully 1: Hey get out of way dweeb!
Bully 2: We actually have something to do with our lives!
Kenta resolved for things to be different this year...
When the trio arrive at school, Kazuo (someone who bullied Kenta) was hosting a kendo tournament to see if anyone could beat him.
Kazuo: Hello everyone. For those of you who don't know me I am the great nephew of kendo legend Yamamoto Kishida. I'll crush anyone in kendo just signup for the tournament!
Masato: What a spoiled brat he had to pay the school to let him host this. Hey Kenta why don't you join?
Kenta: N-No it's okay I'd rather not attract any attention. Hahaha!
Satoshi: Well we should be headed to the auditorium. The ceremony will be starting soon.
After the welcoming ceremony everyone are given there times tables. Masato and Satoshi share the same home room class together so they part from Kenta. As soon as they leave two guys start to pick on Kenta.
Bully 1: Well, well, well. Looks like are old friend Kenta came to Touitsu Academy.
Bully 2: Shi,shi,shi It's a while before classes start lets have a little fun.
Daisuke: Hey cut him some slack its the first day of school.
Bully 2: Whatever.
The bullies walk away.
Kenta: Thank you, Senpai!
Daisuke: No problem, just don't let yourself get bullied so easily. Well, see ya!
Kenta: Yeah...
In math class, Kenta and Satoshi's teacher gives the class a test to see what level they are at.
Classmate 1: To think we would have it easy on the first day...
Classmate 2: Why do we have to do this its 3 pages long!
Kenta finishes the test perfectly in 2 minutes leaving everyone shocked.
The trio finally reunites and hurry towards the cafeteria because they wasted time when Masato forgot his book. They then see Yukio (someone who also got bullied in their old school) some guys who usually hanged around Kazuo threaten Yukio to sign up for the tournament or they will beat him up.
Bully 3: Hey Yukio! Signup or we'll beat you up!
Yukio: O-Okay...
Bully 4: Ha, these loser always give into you so easily.
Masato: Let's see people give into you when I kick your-
Kenta: Wait!
Masato: What now?
Kenta: I..I have an idea!
Masato: Well I'll leave it to you then.
After school the tournament begins. Kazuo is defeating every opponent with ease. Some of the opponents were people who were bullied in Kenta's old school.
Announcer: This raises Kazuo's record to 30-0.
Student 1: Wow. He's so good.
Student 2: Well his uncle is a kendoka.
Finally it is Yukio's turn and he is shaking.
Announcer: Alright let's begin! 3! 2! 1-
???: Hold it!
Announcer: Hmm?
A person in wearing a mask appears wielding a bamboo sword.
Student 3: Who is that?!?!?
Student 1: He looks sorta cool...
Kazuo: Ha! It's just some nerd who thinks he's a superhero. Who are you?
???: I am "A".
Kazuo: What kind of name is-
A: Are you proud beating people that don't even practice kendo! Your a disgrace to kendouka and if your uncle is a real kendouka he would agree with me!
Kazuo: Shut up!
Kazuo gets mad and attacks A with rage. A begins to remember all his kendo training and also the bullying he has experienced.
A: I'll finish this quickly. Form 1...PERFECT CUT!
The two clash. Kazuo's sword is split in half. Then Kazuo realized his gear was also cut right to the skin.
A: You have been defeated end this tournament.
A lot of people begin clap for him but then a teacher comes in.
Math Teacher: What going on!?!?
Just when the teacher is about to console the masked person the room goes pitch black and when they come back on the mask person was gone. Then the masked person is on the roof with Masato and Satoshi who were the ones who caused the blackout.
Masato: I personally think I would have done a better but good job!
A is then revealed as Kenta (obviously!!!)
Preview- "The boys over hear some gang members threatening Shinsuke. What has he gotten himself into? It's up to the team to save him! Next Episode: We Are AOI!"
End
Well I did my best please C&C!