Reviews/Comments for The Envoy (Complete)

[crayzer]

This is the thread for reviews and comments for crayzer's story entitled "The Envoy".
http://otaku-streamers.com/community/showthread.php?9376-The-Envoy-(Complete)

[skyprincess]

It's good, but it has a few errors here in there, like in Ep 1. when talking about Daiku, you said " Daiku a guy you is the kind you looks out for others" so check it over and fix it if you wish. But over all i apsolutely LOVE the plot and your characters (: but you do tend to jump around sometimes. But for a rating 8.5 outa 10 so keep up the good work! and the ending was awesome (:

[crayzer]

It's good, but it has a few errors here in there, like in Ep 1. when talking about Daiku, you said " Daiku a guy you is the kind you looks out for others" so check it over and fix it if you wish. But over all i apsolutely LOVE the plot and your characters (: but you do tend to jump around sometimes. But for a rating 8.5 outa 10 so keep up the good work! and the ending was awesome (:

Thnx for the review. I'll go and change those errors soon...