Violin:Strings of Emotions: Comments and Reviews

[KeiichiMamoru]

Let me know what you think of the story. xD

[solidoxygen]

Hmm, I'm not sure what to say this time. I liked some parts (like the 1st line's excellent foreshadowing), but there were some stylistic problems that I just can't pinpoint. Claws hair in frustration*

Not much to say for now, I hope to see more.

[KeiichiMamoru]

*laughs* Thanks for reading it solidoxygen. xD
Some problems you can't pinpoint? Maybe its some tenses or grammars. *in deep thought*

I updated it, chapter one is out.