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zevlag21
05-10-2010, 08:10 AM
More comment for the pic :D well also with the story...
i hope you enjoyed it you can also guess what happen next... even though its a mystery story i didn't make it that deep...
so what do you think?
MioAkiyama
05-10-2010, 02:37 PM
you should've made the twins a real twin girlD:
but i need more be sure to update :D
and the picture is still cool :D
and the story it is so damn awesome i dont want cliffhangers too >_>
you need to continue zev !!
zevlag21
05-10-2010, 02:39 PM
i ll try writing tomorrow kinda bored so i wrote something... i'll try to finish on tomorrow and thanks
Keir06
05-11-2010, 01:10 PM
Looks Interesting :D
zevlag21
05-11-2010, 01:46 PM
thanks :D
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