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zevlag21
05-10-2010, 08:07 AM
Kinda different from my usual stories that I created
But I hope you will like it

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March 21, 1999

My twin sister died! kind of shocking too me but I was smiling back then because she have everything and she lost all of it. My family is only looking at her as if I was just a reflection of her in a broken glass. They say that twins are genetically thinks the same eventhough they are raise in a different society there is still a possibility that the twins will act the same way but why does she is better than me? She is better than me in any terms. . . . . . I was hoping that I will have a one special talent that only I can do but there isn't a single thing. That talent I was looking for doesn't exist even though how many talents you can say there is still nothing like aliens that doesn't exist eventhough how big the universe is...

March 28, 1999

I didn't attend my sister's funeral because it will be weird that I am the only one smiling while everyone is crying because of the lost of a talented person.
So when I come back at our house my parents where like surprise they start saying

"welcome back Lin!" "we thought that something bad happen to you but when we look at it, it was ken"

After hearing it I was shocked I run too the graveyard and look for the name Lin Gemelia but there wasn't a single name what I see was my name and there was something written "good bye to our loving son" I wish it was raining to much the mood but the rays of the afternoon sun is dazzling its like its rejoicing that I receive this kind of fate so I take a stone and tried to change the Ken to Lin but its impossible. In this world there are many things that is impossible and many things that doesn't exist. I went back home and my parents are smiling at me this is the first time they have smiled at me wait its not really me they are smiling at Lin.

June 7, 1999

The school year has already started, I am currently a 3rd year high school actually the truth is Lin is already a 4th year I just asked my parents to go back to third year. So I go to school wearing a girl's uniform and wearing a wig. While I am walking the students are staring at me I think their thinking that

"Isn't that girl already dead? Wait ahh I see that's his twin brother right. What a weird person"

Or something like that.
The students are starting to stay away from me. It feels like I am being isolated? no I was really being isolated
Here is the biggest problem of my life I don't know where should I enter the girl's CR or the boy's CR. So I ended up not going to any of it
When I am going to get the books for my next class I see that all my books are destroyed. I am already expecting to see something like this too happened. So I entered my next class all of my things are destroyed. So my female seatmate lends me her book. So she started to talk me she said

"I feel sorry for your sister"

"its ok" I replied

then she started to hold onto my hand after that she said while smiling

"Go to the back of the gym after school I will say something to you"

I already know that their would be some people who will gang up on me so I am not that stupid to go there. But after sometime I go back maybe it was about 10pm already. I know that my life is not like a romance movie where the girl will wait for me that long but she was still there standing while using her cell phone as a flash light. Then I said

"what are you doing here its already 10pm?"

"I have to tell something important to you"

"what?"

"your sister didn't die because of suicide? she was murdered"

after hearing that I was shocked and the girl fainted...
to be continued...

I hope you enjoyed it well I think this one will end in chapter 2 or 3 I guess?
-Zevlag21

P.S.
need more comment about the pic well also with the story

zevlag21
05-12-2010, 10:47 AM
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June 8, 1999

June 8, 1999

I let that girl sleep to my room for the whole day because she had a cold. I headed to the school and as usual I am being isolated. For some reasons I started to think why are I even cross-dressing? Is it for my parents? Or I just like too? If I like doing this kind of thing then I am really weird. After school I headed back to our house and there I see that girl waiting at the door. I asked

“Why are you still here”

She replied “Don’t you want to know about the truth?”

At the back of my mind I said yes but I answered,

“Why do you know the truth about this case? If you do go to the police not to me”

When I was about to open the door…

She yelled, “I know the truth! I also tell it to the police but no one believed me”

Why is she so aggressive about this matter? What is my sister to her? Anyway I go inside of our house and said

“How long are you going to cry outside? If you know the truth then tell me already”

So we entered our house and headed to my sister’s room and she said

“I saw it there where three people running away after hanging your sister”

“They might just be a passer-by they are just shock on what they see besides the autopsy tells that their was nothing wrong with it”

She answered aggressively

“Then don’t you wonder why your sister hang herself in the Center park tree? If she is a talented person then she has already known that
many people will be shocked of it.”

I agreed on what she said. My sister would already know that many people would be traumatized when they see it. Its true that she can commit a suicide inside in the house but why did she bother going to that place just to suicide?

I asked her “How did you know all about this? It was already Midnight when this incident happens. What where you doing in the middle of night? Are you one of the murderers?”

She was left in shock when she heard it and started to cry again. She said.

“Your sister gets out of your house at exactly 9:50pm. Base from what I see I think she would meet a person at the central park exactly 10:00pm. About 10:03 that person came and then after 5 minutes your sister faints and the two persons behind the central park tree hanged her”

What?! She didn’t even answer my question but this was rather informative. She even has the exact time. Could it be that she is a detective? No… She is a…

“You’re a stalker right? You live next to our house? What you have said is informative but why would she suddenly faint? Could it be hypnotism but I guess not”

She stopped crying and said

“Your amazing, you even discovered where I live”

“no my sister is more amazing than me”

“You don’t envy your sister right? Its like you love your sister are you into incest?”

“I don’t want to hear that from a lesbian”

After that she headed back home and said while blushing

“Thanks for taking care of me last night”

I replied

“Are you a Bi?”

“I AM NOT!!!”

I headed back to my room and start thinking.

“This kind of case is almost impossible to solve. Its like asking why does the sky looks like wallpaper in the ceiling. Its real but looks unreal”

After that I fell asleep.

June 9, 1999

I go to school again I thought it will be a normal day but I guess not because that girl is back again shouting my name while running. Other
guys might think its ok but I think its irritating. So I looked back and said

“What?!”

“My name is Kim Acosador”

a three lettered name again, parents nowadays are not creative anymore

I answered

“Okay”

“Wait! Uhmm… Can I go to your house later?”

The people in the class starts looking

“You don’t have to shout! Fine do what you want”

The class ended and so we headed back home. I asked for the suicide note of my sister to my parents. if what Kim have said is true the n how come my sister left a suicide note in our house? So I read the letter and I saw the name was changed to my name after seeing I started to laugh and Kim started to wonder. I said

“I thought I could get a clue from this letter but I think I won’t. The handwriting is really the handwriting of my sister. Even the used of words are my sister’s words.”

I see Kim opening the cabinets. I think she is looking for my sister’s valuable stuff or something. I said,

“Is that what stalkers regularly do?”

then she started to reach something on top of the cabinet and then Kim fell and also the small box container. When I open the box there was recorder on it so I play it:

“ahhh, Mic check Mic check, ok”

Wait this is my sister’s voice I continue listening on it.

“Is that you Ken? Its me Lin. I created a mystery for you to solve and I guess you already know it. Well I can’t say if I am alive or dead already. Ehehe now that I said that this mystery will be more harder. If it happens you solved this case with in one month when I die or maybe not me. I’ll give you something that you’ve been looking for the whole time. That’s the end… wait if you are wondering how will I know if you solve the case or not that will also be a part of the problem, ehehehe. . . wait it won’t stop recording. Thei—“

its kinda obvious already that she is still alive but maybe not. Its just making the problem worst.

“oi, Kim” when I look at her. Her eyes where sparkling while saying

“Lin’s voice is beautiful”

“go home already I will think of a way how to solve this”

this is one epic mystery. The only thing I can think of is that Lin left the suicide note and then what’s next I can’t tell if she is alive or not. Maybe I’ll find the answer tomorrow.
There is only 12 more days before this mystery will end.

-to be continued
Not much of a cliffhanger TT__TT

zevlag21
06-14-2010, 02:06 PM
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June 10 1999

There is only 12 more days before the deadline of this mystery and I haven?t found out anything. So I decided that I should look for some clues in the central park. And also Kim asked if she could also come. Well any help is appreciated so I said its ok for her to come.
We arrived at the central park and started to look around but we didn?t find anything. Kim suddenly talks

?mhhh. We should not lose hope?

?Who said I lost my hope?

Then out of nowhere a 7 years old kid appeared and said

?If you are investigating about the incident here. I know something about it?

I am not sure if I can trust this girl but it might be true. So I answered her

?If you know something then tell it to us already?

And she replied, ?I will give you my information but in exchange I will ask for a favor?

?Ok then but give us the information first?

So she started talking about what she saw

?There was this Boy and a Girl. Then the GIRL give a letter to the BOY but the BOY didn?t accepted it. Then after that a person appear at the back and hit the BOY?s head while the GIRL fainted and then they?re 2 persons who hang her?

The story is quite similar to Kim?s story but the difference is there are 3 persons. Which means more problems. Maybe this is because of the difference in the point of view the 3rd person wasn?t noticeable in Kim?s side.

So I asked ?So what do you want now??

Then she replied with sparkling eyes ?give me a name!?

I was surprised but I still give her a name. And named her Lin. So we headed back to our home but while walking I feel that someone is staring us for a long time already. I glance back to see if someone is there but there was nobody. Then suddenly a strong wind passed by and I notice two long golden pigtails behind the tree. But I just I ignored it.

June 11 2010

I let Lin (the 7 yrs old girl) stayed in our house because she didn?t have any parents to begin with. So I headed to school.
Upon arriving in the school I opened my bag and notice a piece of paper. I can say that this handwriting is Lin?s(the 7 yrs old) writing because none of us in our family writes cursive without making it to a Korean characters. I won?t go on with the details about how can she even write like that even though she is a street child and for some reason she didn?t even looked like a street child. So the letter said:

I haven?t told you yet what the guy looks like. His head have an antenna and the length of his hair is quite short, he is wearing a big black-rimmed glass, and he looks kinda gay.

Your sister,
Lin

Your sister? When did she become my sister? Moving on we have our break and I started to search for a person who looks like what she said and Kim is still following me. Luckily I find him so I called him

?hey you?

he replied ?who me??

?yes you! So introduce yourself?

?no way?

?introduce yourself?

?okay?

?for some reason I want to kill you?

?okay?

so we didn?t have a serious discussion with him but he said in the end

?if you are trying to find out something this the only thing I could only say is LE3123. I don?t want myself to be in the next news. My name by the way is Jacob Francisco?
I replied ?thank you?

So he left in a hurry after that kim suddenly said

?I don?t get it. LECABC doesn?t make any sense?

I replied ?LECABC? I guess you don?t know about this kind of stuff. Its ordinary for a family to put equivalent numbers to their surnames so that they can easily remember their pin codes. So the meaning of it is LEAFAR?


FRANCISCO = 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 5 8 , 3 1 3 2 = AFAR
EX. How the coding works. CORN = 5 8 2 4

Kim replied ?how did you know about it??

?its already obvious when he also said his surname. But still it doesn?t make any sense?

Then we saw Dr. Rafael our school doctor he is also the one who did my sister?s autopsy. Wait, LEAFAR RAFAEL he is the one whom Jacob is talking about. So we entered the clinic after Dr. Rafael enters. As I open the door I saw the same hair, the long golden twin-pigtails. I can?t see her face because of the light coming from the window is blinding me but still even without seeing them I already made my conclusion those two are the suspects and only one left. Also there is only 11 more days before this ends.

To Be Continued



Zev ? I said before that I will end it in chapter 2 or 3 but I think this one will continue up to chapter 5 :D. So if you like it leave a comment in what do you think will happen next. I just want to see your reactions XD


P.S. the PIC doesn't look that good =__=