Soujiro Ken
02-08-2010, 12:39 PM
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hey guys.. I was thinking of posting this story in here, but I'm not yet sure if I would continue to do this story or what.. I wanna hear your comments first before starting this whole thing.. so I've decided to post the plot of the story in here and wait for your comments.. XD
story is about Keitaro "Keita" Ichikagi, your average happy-go-lucky type of mischievous guy.. he's got a cute and angelic kind of face, which happens to be the exact opposite of his attitude.. he may look innocent and angelic, but his attitude is very unscrupulous and devilish.. and for that very reason, Keita's parents forced him to attend a prestigious catholic school where students are exaggeratedly disciplined, polite, obedient, kind, and holy like those angels that sing above the sky.. feeling every inch of him out of placed, Keita cursed the way things turned out for him.. being trapped in a school like this means total destruction of the fun he expects at his high school days..
enters Yuna Tsukishiro, your "beauty and brains" type of girl.. being the resident sweet, demur, polite, and well-mannered daughter of the school chairman, Yuna is like the regal princess of the whole school.. everyone admires her, everyone likes her.. but behind the coy and friendly acts she puts up hides the real Yuna who is greedy for attention, fame, and perfection..
Yuna is the complete girl-version of Keita, both of them are devilish human beings that reside within an angelic frame.. the only dissimilar thing about them is that Keita is the "what you see is what you get" type of kid.. he's offensively frank, insensitive and mischievous, and he don't have any plans on hiding it or something.. unlike Yuna, who is fooling and deceiving all the people in the school by putting up kind and friendly acts.. Yuna wants to be the center of attraction all the time, that's why she nurtures her name and impress everyone with her kind acts and well-mannered way of socializing.. Whenever there is somebody that she sees as a threat to her pedestal of paramount attention, she would do everything to sabotage and outwit that person in a stealth and clean way, so that nobody would assume that it was her doings..
now, Keita discovered the dark secrets of Yuna, and Yuna felt threatened at the fact that Keita might expose her real attitude to everyone.. Yuna demands Keita to keep his mouth shut, but Keita is naughty and playfull, always putting up blackmails in any way possible.. thanks to Yuna, Keita is now enjoying his stay at the school after discovering that there is somebody who is equally evil as him.. and Yuna, feeling very threatened and a bit attracted to Keita, declared a war between them in which Keita agreed contentedly.. if there's any special feelings that Keita hold towards Yuna, well, I can't really tell yet.. a person who is as childish and insensitive as Keita would never pick up the slightest hint of that kind of affection.. he's just too childish and dumb to understand those kind of things yet, unlike Yuna, who felt attracted to Keita at the very moment they have first met..
Keita just can't take the fact that Yuna is fooling other people just to have herself at the top of everything.. he hates the way Yuna deceives other people to either manupulate them or destroy them.. that's why he wants to outwit Yuna, because he wants to emancipate the minds of those people whom Yuna trapped in her web of pretending.. that way, he will be more evil than Yuna, and that's what he wants to happen..
the rivalry and challenge goes like this:
since Keita already knows Yuna's real self, the only way to clear things up cleanly is to get rid of Keita.. Yuna would think of plans and tactics that would expel keita out of school.. when that happens, she need not worry about anything anymore.. the fact that she is a malevolent girl would forever be hidden in the eyes of the people around her..
on the other hand, since Keita is very irritated to Yuna's way of pretending, Keita plans on formulating plans that would make Yuna admit her evilness in front of all the people she'd deceived.. it would be far more satisfying for Keita to have everybody discover Yuna's evilness by admitting it to them herself..
each one is as determined as the other to be victorious.. both will do anything and everything to have the other suffer from their evilness.. but when love starts to shake things up, how would they possibly face and accept it?
whew!! that's it!! so, should I start making this story or what? I'll wait for your comments guys.. XD
hey guys.. I was thinking of posting this story in here, but I'm not yet sure if I would continue to do this story or what.. I wanna hear your comments first before starting this whole thing.. so I've decided to post the plot of the story in here and wait for your comments.. XD
story is about Keitaro "Keita" Ichikagi, your average happy-go-lucky type of mischievous guy.. he's got a cute and angelic kind of face, which happens to be the exact opposite of his attitude.. he may look innocent and angelic, but his attitude is very unscrupulous and devilish.. and for that very reason, Keita's parents forced him to attend a prestigious catholic school where students are exaggeratedly disciplined, polite, obedient, kind, and holy like those angels that sing above the sky.. feeling every inch of him out of placed, Keita cursed the way things turned out for him.. being trapped in a school like this means total destruction of the fun he expects at his high school days..
enters Yuna Tsukishiro, your "beauty and brains" type of girl.. being the resident sweet, demur, polite, and well-mannered daughter of the school chairman, Yuna is like the regal princess of the whole school.. everyone admires her, everyone likes her.. but behind the coy and friendly acts she puts up hides the real Yuna who is greedy for attention, fame, and perfection..
Yuna is the complete girl-version of Keita, both of them are devilish human beings that reside within an angelic frame.. the only dissimilar thing about them is that Keita is the "what you see is what you get" type of kid.. he's offensively frank, insensitive and mischievous, and he don't have any plans on hiding it or something.. unlike Yuna, who is fooling and deceiving all the people in the school by putting up kind and friendly acts.. Yuna wants to be the center of attraction all the time, that's why she nurtures her name and impress everyone with her kind acts and well-mannered way of socializing.. Whenever there is somebody that she sees as a threat to her pedestal of paramount attention, she would do everything to sabotage and outwit that person in a stealth and clean way, so that nobody would assume that it was her doings..
now, Keita discovered the dark secrets of Yuna, and Yuna felt threatened at the fact that Keita might expose her real attitude to everyone.. Yuna demands Keita to keep his mouth shut, but Keita is naughty and playfull, always putting up blackmails in any way possible.. thanks to Yuna, Keita is now enjoying his stay at the school after discovering that there is somebody who is equally evil as him.. and Yuna, feeling very threatened and a bit attracted to Keita, declared a war between them in which Keita agreed contentedly.. if there's any special feelings that Keita hold towards Yuna, well, I can't really tell yet.. a person who is as childish and insensitive as Keita would never pick up the slightest hint of that kind of affection.. he's just too childish and dumb to understand those kind of things yet, unlike Yuna, who felt attracted to Keita at the very moment they have first met..
Keita just can't take the fact that Yuna is fooling other people just to have herself at the top of everything.. he hates the way Yuna deceives other people to either manupulate them or destroy them.. that's why he wants to outwit Yuna, because he wants to emancipate the minds of those people whom Yuna trapped in her web of pretending.. that way, he will be more evil than Yuna, and that's what he wants to happen..
the rivalry and challenge goes like this:
since Keita already knows Yuna's real self, the only way to clear things up cleanly is to get rid of Keita.. Yuna would think of plans and tactics that would expel keita out of school.. when that happens, she need not worry about anything anymore.. the fact that she is a malevolent girl would forever be hidden in the eyes of the people around her..
on the other hand, since Keita is very irritated to Yuna's way of pretending, Keita plans on formulating plans that would make Yuna admit her evilness in front of all the people she'd deceived.. it would be far more satisfying for Keita to have everybody discover Yuna's evilness by admitting it to them herself..
each one is as determined as the other to be victorious.. both will do anything and everything to have the other suffer from their evilness.. but when love starts to shake things up, how would they possibly face and accept it?
whew!! that's it!! so, should I start making this story or what? I'll wait for your comments guys.. XD