Reviews/Comment for "My Life"

[ZenNaari]

Here you can make reviews/comments for "My life" Series, you can also read them on facebook so I don't have to upload them here.

http://otaku-streamers.com/community/showthread.php?p=41795#post41795

[solidoxygen]

I would read it, but I'm just not really into ecchi themed stories.

I did skim over a large portion of it, and I would recommend putting the story into a more organized structure. I suggest putting sentences right after another (like what I am doing right now) and only skipping a line if you're shifting to another time or place.

I would normally suggest some plot development as well, but considering the genre of the story I suppose that's not really that important is it?

The story reminds me of DearS (anime).

[ZenNaari]

thank you for your encouragement