Ceyrie
12-28-2009, 01:42 PM
Hi guys!
I wrote last summer vacation an original story entitled "The Unlivables." Aside from it's pretty long...and I'm not sure if you guys would like it, I'll just write a summary about it.
A video game console releases a radioactive element which made all males have only female children. As a result, male humans are endangered while the females are so numerous. The remaining men formed a group called "Patriarchs" and ruled over the world in a terrifying dictatorship.
There was a terrible famine, and everyone's going hungry. In order to ensure food supplies are sufficient, the Patriarchs started killing all women who are sick or disabled when they reach 18 years old. These women are called "The Unlivables."
Amber Reed, a 12 years old blind girl, is one of them. Her blindness was caused by a chemical plant explosion. Now, it was discovered that the chemical which spilled in her eyes is the very chemical which can cure the radiation in males. However, the Patriarchs are not happy about it...since they still want to rule the world. They utilized all means necessary to eliminate Amber and the doctor who discovered the chemical...
Please post comments! I'm really nervous because this is the first full story I've wrote...=)
I wrote last summer vacation an original story entitled "The Unlivables." Aside from it's pretty long...and I'm not sure if you guys would like it, I'll just write a summary about it.
A video game console releases a radioactive element which made all males have only female children. As a result, male humans are endangered while the females are so numerous. The remaining men formed a group called "Patriarchs" and ruled over the world in a terrifying dictatorship.
There was a terrible famine, and everyone's going hungry. In order to ensure food supplies are sufficient, the Patriarchs started killing all women who are sick or disabled when they reach 18 years old. These women are called "The Unlivables."
Amber Reed, a 12 years old blind girl, is one of them. Her blindness was caused by a chemical plant explosion. Now, it was discovered that the chemical which spilled in her eyes is the very chemical which can cure the radiation in males. However, the Patriarchs are not happy about it...since they still want to rule the world. They utilized all means necessary to eliminate Amber and the doctor who discovered the chemical...
Please post comments! I'm really nervous because this is the first full story I've wrote...=)