ZenNaari
11-02-2009, 11:11 AM
This is one of my oneshot stories I make in School. Just showing you guys what I got. I'll delete this after getting a few reviews or comments. Then I'll create a new series for you guys. (First-person/Romance/Horror/Brutal/Supernatural/Action)
Comment Here: http://otaku-streamers.com/community/showthread.php?p=34762#post34762
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Jericho
Jerry is my classmate in college. He is known for his scary and loner personality, but then, no one really knows him. There's been a lot of rumors going on saying that he's a murderer or a lone frat boy. But I don't believe that.
My name is Julie. Not that popular as well, since I just moved in here. But when I arrived here, I only remeber being knocked out. But then, I was saved by Jerry, well, he was just carrying me but I assumed he saved me. He only took me to his hammock in the backyard but he told me not to go inside the house. Even though I felt a killer aura around him, I got knocked a sense of love that wanted to know more about him.
Today, I'm going to visit his house. After school, I took the route to his house. But then I was surprised to see the local frat boys from campus trying to bash his door open. They were armed with different kinds of guns. Seeing that, I hid in the safest place I can find.
"Open up! We'll teach you how to reject an invitation from us! Right boys?!" The leader shouted. The boys shouted in a manly but gross manner.
About maybe five minuites later, Jerry came out with a shotgun and went open fire. "Get the hell out!" He shot another bullet, "Can't a guy study in piece! Move it!"
The frat boys cowardly ran away. The injured stayed in the yard and got kicked off to the street by Jerry. He went back into the house wearing a doctors outfit with a carving knife and he cut the injured's hands off. Then he kicked them again until they stood up on their own an ran off.
The good thing is, nobody died. Damn, I really thought Jerry would turn out to be a nice guy but leaving no pity... wait... when I think about it. He didn't kill any of them. Sure he cut the injured's hands off but then he didn't kill them. Thinking about it still gets me scared.
Since I have no friends to advise me, I decided to go straight back to my plan. and go visit Jerry. Boy I'm scared. What if he kills me for this? I stood up straight, but my spine is frozen solid. My head keeps pumping as if it replaced my heart. I slowly reached for the doorbell. My finger stiffened as I kept reaching.
Finally, after pressing his doorbell. Jerry immediately bashed the door open with his shotgun.
"I told you to get the-"
I screamed so loud I cried. I thought for sure I was going to die. But i didn't run away.
"Eh? What're you doing here? You hired by a frat?" He asked rudely.
I shook my head. But I'm still so scared I can't stop my tears from flowing.
"Stop crying already!" He threw the shotgun back in the house where it landed safely in his couch, "What do you want?"
Still, my motive of wanting to inside his house remained. i had to think of something, "I want-" I tried to think of something quick, "I want to study..."
"If you wanted to study just go home." He rudely spoke.
"I want to study with Jerry!" I covered my mouth after saying that.
"Eh?" Jerry looked to the right and left, making sure nobody's around, "Well, did you get that homework we got?"
I nodded my head.
"Come in. But you tell NO ONE what youv'e done here ." He spoke in a rude manner but in a polite voice.
I nodded my head again. I tried to stand up but Jerry immediately helped me up.
I stopped crying for I saw something amazing. His house is very luxurious and fashoinable, but he has nothing shiny or blingy around. His whole house was dim with yellow lights, except his room, where everything is completely dark except his study table where a bright white lampshade lit.
It got us a week to get along with each other. We had our study plans planned out and so on. But he still remained his loner self with a killer aura. But I somehow grew attached to him, though he tells me to stay away from school.
The frat boys came back and was driven out again by Jerry. I was a little afraid to approach since he's still holding his shotgun, but in his eyes I knew that he knew that I was coming so he waited outside.
Little did he know that I baked some cookies to surprise him. When I greeted him and presented the cookies, he snatched it from me.
"H-How did you know? It's my birthday today?" He said.
I was shocked. I gave him cookies in coincidence that it was his birthday, "I- I didn't know. But yeah, I hoped you liked it anyway." I was hoping he would smile, but the only thing I felt was his killer aura weakening.
Anyway, today is the day where I also get to study IN his room. I felt so attached to him since The only things I could see is him and the table. I watched him do his homework. I really want to confess to him already.
"Jerry?" I muttered.
"What?" He said in a boring manner.
"Jerry, I know this is sudden, but..." He looked at me looking a bit shocked.
"Jerry! I Love-!"
Out of nowhere, I heard the window crash open and I saw a shining blade stabbing Jerry on the back. I screamed in horror as Jerry fell on the floor lifeless.
"Oh my, Jerry made a girlfriend huh? Happy Birthday Jerry, I'm sending your girl to hell with you." He said.
I cowered back to wherever there was in the room. I cried so hard, I knew very well that I'm dead.
Suddenly, I heard a screeching voicefrom the room, "Who~s goi~ng to he~ll no~w?" it said.
I saw two red eyes pop up from behind the killer. A dark purple arua allowed me to see a black shadow in the image of Jerry lift the killer above the room. The whole room was suddenly lightened up with purple killer aura. I found my self under the commotion in Jerry's bed.
The killer couldn't control himself. I found the shadowy image of Jerry sitting on a dark throne like a dark lord ready to torment the convict till his death. It stood up, well, it didn't have any legs, but it had boned wings that lifted it off the ground. It's three thick shadowy claws ripped the killer's head off.
I was completely frozen. The dark lord put it's head near the body remnant and started absorbing the black soul of the killer. It then fell down back into Jerry's body.
Jerry turned on the main light for his room. The damage he recieved from the stab faded away. Jerry started coughing harder and harder. Then he threw up a black soul that formed itself into a shadowy underling. Jerry cried tears of pain and kicked the what-looked-like-a-minion into the living room.
"Julie..." Jerry said in a weak voice, "What you said earlier."
"Jerry?" I cried so much from being scared I backed away from him.
"Julie, don't tell anyone about this okay." Jerry smiled an evil smile, but I trusted it.
Jerry explained to me that he is a dark soul that has been tormented to live on earth forever as an immortal being. When the body is killed, the killer's soul is exchanged to replace the body force of Jerry. Once he has been healed, he throws up the soul and it turns into a minion which will be treated as a slave for Jerry.
"Julie. You don't have to answer me now but... be my bride... please protect me. I don't want this pain I experience every now and then. It's the same as being in hell, everlasting death." He cried, then he fainted and landed on my arms.
"I... I will protect you Jerry." I hugged his knocked out body, "I accept to become the Dark Lord's Bride." I smiled.
-End
-Epilouge
My job isn't easy as Jerry's wife. I still go to school with him though, but no one knows that we're married. I eventually became like him, except i'm more friendlier and I also eventually gathered some friends. But now, when we get home, he will be completely different a go lovey-dovey with me. Well, we don't plan on having kids yet, but maybe after we graduate we'll manage. I work part-time with my friends as an accountant, while Jerry does his own home-office work where he seems to get along well. What can I say? Hi, I'm Julie, The Dark Lord's Wife!
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You probably already know that I'm not a girl. But this is just self-training. Jericho is the 2nd First-Person and the 1st Horror story I made. Hope you like it.
-Zen Naari (to be the greatest novelist in the world)
If you have any suggestions on how I can improve or requests for an online novel *series*, just post it in the Comments/Reviews Section for Jericho.
Comment Here: http://otaku-streamers.com/community/showthread.php?p=34762#post34762
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Jericho
Jerry is my classmate in college. He is known for his scary and loner personality, but then, no one really knows him. There's been a lot of rumors going on saying that he's a murderer or a lone frat boy. But I don't believe that.
My name is Julie. Not that popular as well, since I just moved in here. But when I arrived here, I only remeber being knocked out. But then, I was saved by Jerry, well, he was just carrying me but I assumed he saved me. He only took me to his hammock in the backyard but he told me not to go inside the house. Even though I felt a killer aura around him, I got knocked a sense of love that wanted to know more about him.
Today, I'm going to visit his house. After school, I took the route to his house. But then I was surprised to see the local frat boys from campus trying to bash his door open. They were armed with different kinds of guns. Seeing that, I hid in the safest place I can find.
"Open up! We'll teach you how to reject an invitation from us! Right boys?!" The leader shouted. The boys shouted in a manly but gross manner.
About maybe five minuites later, Jerry came out with a shotgun and went open fire. "Get the hell out!" He shot another bullet, "Can't a guy study in piece! Move it!"
The frat boys cowardly ran away. The injured stayed in the yard and got kicked off to the street by Jerry. He went back into the house wearing a doctors outfit with a carving knife and he cut the injured's hands off. Then he kicked them again until they stood up on their own an ran off.
The good thing is, nobody died. Damn, I really thought Jerry would turn out to be a nice guy but leaving no pity... wait... when I think about it. He didn't kill any of them. Sure he cut the injured's hands off but then he didn't kill them. Thinking about it still gets me scared.
Since I have no friends to advise me, I decided to go straight back to my plan. and go visit Jerry. Boy I'm scared. What if he kills me for this? I stood up straight, but my spine is frozen solid. My head keeps pumping as if it replaced my heart. I slowly reached for the doorbell. My finger stiffened as I kept reaching.
Finally, after pressing his doorbell. Jerry immediately bashed the door open with his shotgun.
"I told you to get the-"
I screamed so loud I cried. I thought for sure I was going to die. But i didn't run away.
"Eh? What're you doing here? You hired by a frat?" He asked rudely.
I shook my head. But I'm still so scared I can't stop my tears from flowing.
"Stop crying already!" He threw the shotgun back in the house where it landed safely in his couch, "What do you want?"
Still, my motive of wanting to inside his house remained. i had to think of something, "I want-" I tried to think of something quick, "I want to study..."
"If you wanted to study just go home." He rudely spoke.
"I want to study with Jerry!" I covered my mouth after saying that.
"Eh?" Jerry looked to the right and left, making sure nobody's around, "Well, did you get that homework we got?"
I nodded my head.
"Come in. But you tell NO ONE what youv'e done here ." He spoke in a rude manner but in a polite voice.
I nodded my head again. I tried to stand up but Jerry immediately helped me up.
I stopped crying for I saw something amazing. His house is very luxurious and fashoinable, but he has nothing shiny or blingy around. His whole house was dim with yellow lights, except his room, where everything is completely dark except his study table where a bright white lampshade lit.
It got us a week to get along with each other. We had our study plans planned out and so on. But he still remained his loner self with a killer aura. But I somehow grew attached to him, though he tells me to stay away from school.
The frat boys came back and was driven out again by Jerry. I was a little afraid to approach since he's still holding his shotgun, but in his eyes I knew that he knew that I was coming so he waited outside.
Little did he know that I baked some cookies to surprise him. When I greeted him and presented the cookies, he snatched it from me.
"H-How did you know? It's my birthday today?" He said.
I was shocked. I gave him cookies in coincidence that it was his birthday, "I- I didn't know. But yeah, I hoped you liked it anyway." I was hoping he would smile, but the only thing I felt was his killer aura weakening.
Anyway, today is the day where I also get to study IN his room. I felt so attached to him since The only things I could see is him and the table. I watched him do his homework. I really want to confess to him already.
"Jerry?" I muttered.
"What?" He said in a boring manner.
"Jerry, I know this is sudden, but..." He looked at me looking a bit shocked.
"Jerry! I Love-!"
Out of nowhere, I heard the window crash open and I saw a shining blade stabbing Jerry on the back. I screamed in horror as Jerry fell on the floor lifeless.
"Oh my, Jerry made a girlfriend huh? Happy Birthday Jerry, I'm sending your girl to hell with you." He said.
I cowered back to wherever there was in the room. I cried so hard, I knew very well that I'm dead.
Suddenly, I heard a screeching voicefrom the room, "Who~s goi~ng to he~ll no~w?" it said.
I saw two red eyes pop up from behind the killer. A dark purple arua allowed me to see a black shadow in the image of Jerry lift the killer above the room. The whole room was suddenly lightened up with purple killer aura. I found my self under the commotion in Jerry's bed.
The killer couldn't control himself. I found the shadowy image of Jerry sitting on a dark throne like a dark lord ready to torment the convict till his death. It stood up, well, it didn't have any legs, but it had boned wings that lifted it off the ground. It's three thick shadowy claws ripped the killer's head off.
I was completely frozen. The dark lord put it's head near the body remnant and started absorbing the black soul of the killer. It then fell down back into Jerry's body.
Jerry turned on the main light for his room. The damage he recieved from the stab faded away. Jerry started coughing harder and harder. Then he threw up a black soul that formed itself into a shadowy underling. Jerry cried tears of pain and kicked the what-looked-like-a-minion into the living room.
"Julie..." Jerry said in a weak voice, "What you said earlier."
"Jerry?" I cried so much from being scared I backed away from him.
"Julie, don't tell anyone about this okay." Jerry smiled an evil smile, but I trusted it.
Jerry explained to me that he is a dark soul that has been tormented to live on earth forever as an immortal being. When the body is killed, the killer's soul is exchanged to replace the body force of Jerry. Once he has been healed, he throws up the soul and it turns into a minion which will be treated as a slave for Jerry.
"Julie. You don't have to answer me now but... be my bride... please protect me. I don't want this pain I experience every now and then. It's the same as being in hell, everlasting death." He cried, then he fainted and landed on my arms.
"I... I will protect you Jerry." I hugged his knocked out body, "I accept to become the Dark Lord's Bride." I smiled.
-End
-Epilouge
My job isn't easy as Jerry's wife. I still go to school with him though, but no one knows that we're married. I eventually became like him, except i'm more friendlier and I also eventually gathered some friends. But now, when we get home, he will be completely different a go lovey-dovey with me. Well, we don't plan on having kids yet, but maybe after we graduate we'll manage. I work part-time with my friends as an accountant, while Jerry does his own home-office work where he seems to get along well. What can I say? Hi, I'm Julie, The Dark Lord's Wife!
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You probably already know that I'm not a girl. But this is just self-training. Jericho is the 2nd First-Person and the 1st Horror story I made. Hope you like it.
-Zen Naari (to be the greatest novelist in the world)
If you have any suggestions on how I can improve or requests for an online novel *series*, just post it in the Comments/Reviews Section for Jericho.