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09-01-2009, 02:47 AM
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DEEP ROUGE
CHAPTER 1: Bat is vampire?s best friend
"I was shot in the head but I didn't die"
"Why?"
"Maybe because I was holding this bat"
5 days before
I am a transfer student in Mary?s Light University. We are wearing uniforms even though we are already college student and we also have to wear this black jacket even though it?s hot. While I was being introduced I noticed a girl holding a bat with red ribbon. What I think about her is that maybe she just copied it from some anime she saw. I think she is really cute so I stared at her until the introduction was over. Then my professor said that I could seat in any vacant seat in the classroom. I suddenly notice that there is a lot of vacant seat around her so I seat right besides her. The people in my class were surprised that I seated right besides her. Someone from my class walked towards me and she said
"I think it would be better if you would seat somewhere else"
Then I ask "why?" she quickly replied, "That girl is dangerous". Dangerous how could be a cute girl be dangerous that is the question I had in my mind. Then I answered her "maybe it is just a misunderstanding because she brings such a fancy bat" then she replied, "just don't feel sorry in the end". So I seated after that conversation and asked her what's her name but she didn't replied. So I keep following her wherever she goes and ask her what?s her name. The class ended but she never tell her name. I notice that she is waiting outside of the gate holding her bat. So I immediately run towards her. Then suddenly she swings her bat that almost hit my face and I said "that was dangerous, you shouldn't swing your bat like that" then she ask
"What is your name?"
"My name? My name is Kenneth Rouge"
"Such a fancy name"
"So why did you ask for it?"
"So that I could put it in my Red notebook"
"Red Notebook?"
"So shall we begin??"
"Huh?!"
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Then begin to swing her bat like she is trying to kill me. Then she hits me in my face. Then when she was getting close to me to give the final blow she suddenly notices that there is no mark on my face. I thought that she would be surprised after seeing that I wasn't injured but instead she said "you are good at dodging you also pretended that you got hit" my reaction was like ehhh?! And then I said, "Yeah I was pretty good at dodging. Ahahaha" but the truth is that I am a vampire. She suddenly said
"From now on you are my subordinate"
"ehh?!"
"You always follow me and you are quite strong so that makes you as my subordinate"
"I see? So would you at least give me your name"
"My name is Maria Liwanag"
Maria liwanag that sounds funny? I can't control my laugh so I burst it all out and said, "Are you the daughter of the Principal?" then she remains silent. So I stop from laughing and said, "You're the daughter of the principal aren't you?" she replied "no comment" and I answered, "Okay then"
While we are walking home Maria speak in an angry manner saying, "Why are you following me?!" and I replied "because this is where my house is" and then upon arriving at my house I notice that Maria is standing in the next house that means we are neighbors. She immediately entered her house upon noticing it. So I decided to go to her room, which is in the second floor. I was looking around her room and I noticed that her room is really neat despite of that kind of attitude. She noticed me staring in her window so she suddenly covers the window with curtain but she didn't know that I break her window a while ago. Then I entered and she was on complete shock because I catch her watching animes. Then I said.
"So you like animes, You're an otaku and yet you show to other people that you are a delinquent student. Hmmm"
"I just watch anime because I learn new fighting styles, that's all"
"Fighting styles you say but isn't that a Shoujo anime?"
"I thought it was an action anime"
"Don't worry I also like anime"
After finishing one episode of that anime I told her "If you want your secret to be a secret you need to go out with me this Sunday" and her face was turning red that it was like its about to explode. She answered "I am not going out with you because I like you or anything this is just for the sake of me being an otaku" and I replied "a tsundere huh? I was hoping that you will hit me with your bat or something" she answered "do you really think that I will hit someone with no reason?!" and I said "YES".
So the day has come where we are going out
She was really cute in that day wearing a girly dress and jeans. Ehhh?!! What's with the jeans? Upon noticing it I said, "You should remove your pants" and she replies,
"This is my own sense of style",
"But I think you would look more girly if you remove it."
"Who cares about what your think you are just my subordinate"
"So you don't mind me spreading your secret around the campus, Huh?"
"Okay I get it"
Then when she got out from her room I saw her very slim legs and cute face I feel like I was going to die and she said "we need to get going, I don't want to waste my time".
So we headed to the mall and do what a normal couple will do go shopping, eat something that is different from the usual, picture taking, and watching a romance movie. By the way the movie was really dramatic so she cried at the end of the movie and I said, "your quite emotional, aren't you?" and she answered, "You should be comforting me, not criticizing me" I replied, "okay then" after that incident she said that she would go to the rest room and she ask me to hold her bat so I waited in the bench near the rest room. I closed my eyes for a bit and see what other people are thinking, to be exact I am looking at their past which means every 1 split-second have passed it is already considered as past. How could I do it? What else because I am a vampire, well normal vampire couldn't do it because they are a complete vampire which means they have drunk a human's blood but I am different you would call me as an incomplete vampire because I swear that I would never drink a human's blood so in exchange every time I close my eyes I see other people's past. I noticed that someone is getting beaten and the people around him said "IF YOU WANT TO LIVE GIVE US YOUR BELONGINGS" of course I couldn't help him because I know that it would be already over when I got there. After a few minutes she already get out from the rest room and I asked, "what took you so long?" as expected she said "you don't need to know anything". The sun was already setting down so we decided to go back home already. While walking outside I notice that their was a group of men who are looking at us and when I looked at their faces closely they are the guys who beaten up a man in a while ago. So I said to Maria. " We should walk faster" and she asked "Why?" I replied, "Just follow what I said". I accidentally closed my eyes and see what they are planning. They are planning to holdup us because they know that Maria is the daughter of the principal. Then someone from their group grabbed Maria's hands and when I looked at him someone hit me in my back. They take Maria as a hostage and they are still continuing on beating me. So they leave me no choice I used Maria's bat and swing it to them. Believe it or not they are all knocked out with just one swing the only one left is their leader who is holding Maria. Of course he will be surprised because I managed to knock them out with one swing. Without hesitation he immediately pull out his gun and shot me in the forehead but I couldn't die just because of that. I really want to save Maria so I have no choice but to reveal whom I really am. Even though I am an incomplete vampire I have an ability that can make people hallucinate when they make an eye contact to my eyes. I didn't notice that Maria was also looking at my eyes so she was able to see a hallucination where I brutally killed the criminal.
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Of course she would have fainted after seeing that. So I carry her until we reached our house. When she woke up I was expecting that she would be frightened to me after seeing that but she asked in a calm manner, "Why are you still alive?" so I replied,
"Because I was holding this bat that's why I am alive"
"That is obviously a lie"
I think that she already know what I am so I tell her "I am a Vampire" and she answered me, "Hmmm? I have a subordinate that will continue looking at me until the time I die, huh?" and I answered, "That is true?"
End of chapter 1
PLEASE WAIT FOR THE MANGA OF IT I WILL START MAKING IT MAYBE NEXT MONTH. HOPE YOU ENJOY IT ? Zevlag 21
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DEEP ROUGE
CHAPTER 1: Bat is vampire?s best friend
"I was shot in the head but I didn't die"
"Why?"
"Maybe because I was holding this bat"
5 days before
I am a transfer student in Mary?s Light University. We are wearing uniforms even though we are already college student and we also have to wear this black jacket even though it?s hot. While I was being introduced I noticed a girl holding a bat with red ribbon. What I think about her is that maybe she just copied it from some anime she saw. I think she is really cute so I stared at her until the introduction was over. Then my professor said that I could seat in any vacant seat in the classroom. I suddenly notice that there is a lot of vacant seat around her so I seat right besides her. The people in my class were surprised that I seated right besides her. Someone from my class walked towards me and she said
"I think it would be better if you would seat somewhere else"
Then I ask "why?" she quickly replied, "That girl is dangerous". Dangerous how could be a cute girl be dangerous that is the question I had in my mind. Then I answered her "maybe it is just a misunderstanding because she brings such a fancy bat" then she replied, "just don't feel sorry in the end". So I seated after that conversation and asked her what's her name but she didn't replied. So I keep following her wherever she goes and ask her what?s her name. The class ended but she never tell her name. I notice that she is waiting outside of the gate holding her bat. So I immediately run towards her. Then suddenly she swings her bat that almost hit my face and I said "that was dangerous, you shouldn't swing your bat like that" then she ask
"What is your name?"
"My name? My name is Kenneth Rouge"
"Such a fancy name"
"So why did you ask for it?"
"So that I could put it in my Red notebook"
"Red Notebook?"
"So shall we begin??"
"Huh?!"
http://otaku-streamers.com/community/picture.php?albumid=512&pictureid=4944
Then begin to swing her bat like she is trying to kill me. Then she hits me in my face. Then when she was getting close to me to give the final blow she suddenly notices that there is no mark on my face. I thought that she would be surprised after seeing that I wasn't injured but instead she said "you are good at dodging you also pretended that you got hit" my reaction was like ehhh?! And then I said, "Yeah I was pretty good at dodging. Ahahaha" but the truth is that I am a vampire. She suddenly said
"From now on you are my subordinate"
"ehh?!"
"You always follow me and you are quite strong so that makes you as my subordinate"
"I see? So would you at least give me your name"
"My name is Maria Liwanag"
Maria liwanag that sounds funny? I can't control my laugh so I burst it all out and said, "Are you the daughter of the Principal?" then she remains silent. So I stop from laughing and said, "You're the daughter of the principal aren't you?" she replied "no comment" and I answered, "Okay then"
While we are walking home Maria speak in an angry manner saying, "Why are you following me?!" and I replied "because this is where my house is" and then upon arriving at my house I notice that Maria is standing in the next house that means we are neighbors. She immediately entered her house upon noticing it. So I decided to go to her room, which is in the second floor. I was looking around her room and I noticed that her room is really neat despite of that kind of attitude. She noticed me staring in her window so she suddenly covers the window with curtain but she didn't know that I break her window a while ago. Then I entered and she was on complete shock because I catch her watching animes. Then I said.
"So you like animes, You're an otaku and yet you show to other people that you are a delinquent student. Hmmm"
"I just watch anime because I learn new fighting styles, that's all"
"Fighting styles you say but isn't that a Shoujo anime?"
"I thought it was an action anime"
"Don't worry I also like anime"
After finishing one episode of that anime I told her "If you want your secret to be a secret you need to go out with me this Sunday" and her face was turning red that it was like its about to explode. She answered "I am not going out with you because I like you or anything this is just for the sake of me being an otaku" and I replied "a tsundere huh? I was hoping that you will hit me with your bat or something" she answered "do you really think that I will hit someone with no reason?!" and I said "YES".
So the day has come where we are going out
She was really cute in that day wearing a girly dress and jeans. Ehhh?!! What's with the jeans? Upon noticing it I said, "You should remove your pants" and she replies,
"This is my own sense of style",
"But I think you would look more girly if you remove it."
"Who cares about what your think you are just my subordinate"
"So you don't mind me spreading your secret around the campus, Huh?"
"Okay I get it"
Then when she got out from her room I saw her very slim legs and cute face I feel like I was going to die and she said "we need to get going, I don't want to waste my time".
So we headed to the mall and do what a normal couple will do go shopping, eat something that is different from the usual, picture taking, and watching a romance movie. By the way the movie was really dramatic so she cried at the end of the movie and I said, "your quite emotional, aren't you?" and she answered, "You should be comforting me, not criticizing me" I replied, "okay then" after that incident she said that she would go to the rest room and she ask me to hold her bat so I waited in the bench near the rest room. I closed my eyes for a bit and see what other people are thinking, to be exact I am looking at their past which means every 1 split-second have passed it is already considered as past. How could I do it? What else because I am a vampire, well normal vampire couldn't do it because they are a complete vampire which means they have drunk a human's blood but I am different you would call me as an incomplete vampire because I swear that I would never drink a human's blood so in exchange every time I close my eyes I see other people's past. I noticed that someone is getting beaten and the people around him said "IF YOU WANT TO LIVE GIVE US YOUR BELONGINGS" of course I couldn't help him because I know that it would be already over when I got there. After a few minutes she already get out from the rest room and I asked, "what took you so long?" as expected she said "you don't need to know anything". The sun was already setting down so we decided to go back home already. While walking outside I notice that their was a group of men who are looking at us and when I looked at their faces closely they are the guys who beaten up a man in a while ago. So I said to Maria. " We should walk faster" and she asked "Why?" I replied, "Just follow what I said". I accidentally closed my eyes and see what they are planning. They are planning to holdup us because they know that Maria is the daughter of the principal. Then someone from their group grabbed Maria's hands and when I looked at him someone hit me in my back. They take Maria as a hostage and they are still continuing on beating me. So they leave me no choice I used Maria's bat and swing it to them. Believe it or not they are all knocked out with just one swing the only one left is their leader who is holding Maria. Of course he will be surprised because I managed to knock them out with one swing. Without hesitation he immediately pull out his gun and shot me in the forehead but I couldn't die just because of that. I really want to save Maria so I have no choice but to reveal whom I really am. Even though I am an incomplete vampire I have an ability that can make people hallucinate when they make an eye contact to my eyes. I didn't notice that Maria was also looking at my eyes so she was able to see a hallucination where I brutally killed the criminal.
http://otaku-streamers.com/community/picture.php?albumid=512&pictureid=4943
Of course she would have fainted after seeing that. So I carry her until we reached our house. When she woke up I was expecting that she would be frightened to me after seeing that but she asked in a calm manner, "Why are you still alive?" so I replied,
"Because I was holding this bat that's why I am alive"
"That is obviously a lie"
I think that she already know what I am so I tell her "I am a Vampire" and she answered me, "Hmmm? I have a subordinate that will continue looking at me until the time I die, huh?" and I answered, "That is true?"
End of chapter 1
PLEASE WAIT FOR THE MANGA OF IT I WILL START MAKING IT MAYBE NEXT MONTH. HOPE YOU ENJOY IT ? Zevlag 21
PLEASE REPORT IF THEIR IS A PROBLEM IN THE PICTURE