Reviews/ Comments for Wishes: In the Light & From the Dark

[Pattehfilipino]

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(Had that title image but I dont think It would fit in either story lol )

Hmm I can't believe I'm posting this now <__<
Anyway yes... reviews/comments for both stories shall be in one thread because they're very much linked >___>

Hahahaa... I'm not very confident over what I did but oh well xD
The future chapters will be up.. but don't expect it for a while. 2nd year college shall start up for me and I doubt I will get any writing/ drawing done in the first couple of weeks ... unless I go into overdrive before it happens >.<

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based off of naive assumptions the rest of the story I had created now only brings me pain.

[jadeliciousdk]

I like the way your stories interact though it is a hassle to jump back and forth between threads in order to advance evenly in the stories. Why not just put them in one combined story, then you design the reading order as you please :)

That said I can understand why you think of them as two different stories.

Wishes In the Light seems pretty carefree, without much dept, a happy story about two soulmates following the girls point of view.

Wishes from the dark on the other hand is way darker, I like how you start the story then indifference the world has to him our blank main character, it sets a dark and grim mood, with should I say fear of what to come. Must say though that the part were the two families meet becomes slightly confusing because of you no-name policy.

But anyway your stories really gains from being linked together like that, you get a deep understanding of what the situation is like without being told a lot :) So thumbs up and keep going :D

Also love the illustrations!