Charms and Spells: Reviews/Comments

[koedt]

You may not be good, but the fact that you started drawing one means that you have a passion for it! So I'm saying good job! :)

Keep up the good work! :D

[zevlag21]

THANK you but i think i am a little bit stupid posting a 1 page per day might be really stupid... I forgot to tell the genre: action, love, and comedy... Here is pages 2-4... enjoy and comments pls... >_<v sorry for the many typo in page 3 its not ib its in while in page in page 4 its not ginna its gonna... Its hard to notice it in adobe i just noticed it when i already posted it...

[DarkPrinceKnight]

have you created a time-line
usually I make a time line to show how I would place the action's in place, and also to make sure I draw the amount of pic (or i call them cubes or boxes), also don't take it too much in mind typo's happen alot when you first start out ^^ I still do it even now... one time i put cake instead of take other times I dont even know what I said...like this one time when I was typeing a sentence... I acedentally put my home work there v_v

[zevlag21]

page 5-7 is here... we should take some break after the action so the next pages camehe channel... thank you for reading

[MioAkiyama]

f3els like me reading a real manga online

[zevlag21]

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT ANYWAYS CHAPTER 1 will end soon i just finished drawing the 9th and the 10th pages... I ALREADY UPLOADED 9&10 i think it is the best page so far...

[AiChan]

f3els like me reading a real manga online

Same here, keep up the work zevalg =D and do more chapters. ^^

[zevlag21]

i will do more chapters maybe until chapter 30+... And i need help... could someone give me a name its hard to think of names... yeah if they are some people suddenly gets curious about the 8th page its just like a commercial break or something you will usually see them in every end of a chapter... so thank you for reading my manga...

[vivien]

I suggest that you outline your drawings with markers or sign pens...so that the details of the drawings will be clear...

[zevlag21]

i don't have a budget to buy a marker... but i am using sign pen... but in the other pages i only use a pencil because its to hard to shade all of it... thank you for your suggestion...

[vivien]

it's okay...I have a marker here...hehe
just keep up your work!

[zevlag21]

i don't have a budget to buy a marker... but i am using sign pen... but in the other pages i only use a pencil because its to hard to shade all of it... thank you for your suggestion...

CHAPTER ONE has ended you can see it by clicking on the site below my signature by the way CHAPTER TWO will be posted next week I will not be posting one page per day... and yeah maybe tomorrow i will be posting the volume cover an it is colored... FOR THOSE WHO READ IT THANK YOU...

[Jarsha]

Its not the best but I love respect that you have the will to write and draw your own manga. I wish you the best of luck.

[zevlag21]

yeah i agree with you they are many elements that is missing in that manga ... toning and background but i am now studying how to tone and drawing architectural stuff... thanks for the comment anyway

[Pascon]

good enough but drawing still look :emhh06: a bit messy...well,overall is OK!

[ravensoulx28]

Hmm... The artworks nice although it needs a bit of polishing. The flow of the story is nice, it had me hooked. Are there any manga or artists the influence your work? I'm just curious. Although there are some areas in the grammar department that needs to be worked on and is it just me or you don't add shadows? Try using shadows cause it enhances the texture and adds depth to the characters. I hope you don't take my words hard, I'm just being critical. Over-all it is a good read and I liked it. Keep up the good work.

[zevlag21]

Hmm... The artworks nice although it needs a bit of polishing. The flow of the story is nice, it had me hooked. Are there any manga or artists the influence your work? I'm just curious. Although there are some areas in the grammar department that needs to be worked on and is it just me or you don't add shadows? Try using shadows cause it enhances the texture and adds depth to the characters. I hope you don't take my words hard, I'm just being critical. Over-all it is a good read and I liked it. Keep up the good work.

thank you for the tips gonna remake this sometime... i think this manga was created because of Nagato yes Nagato of haruhi Suzmiya... nagato was kinda cool...

[AnimeYuio]

wow i'm sooo jealous... i can't even draw mangas XD

[zevlag21]

omg 0__0 someone commented in my old manga anyways thank you but i think you should look at my new manga entitled blue purse :3 http://otaku-streamers.com/community/showthread.php?5520-Blue-purse&p=119422#post119422

[ayumitsuki14]

Have you removed the link or something?
Err. Sorry but how/where can I read this work of yours?