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ZenNaari
10-04-2011, 09:57 AM
Aria is a highschool girl who loves handsome men. She goes around town everyday to buy the latest Men's Fashion Model Magazine and take pictures of local men. Not one of the people that know her knows this hobby of hers. To everyone else. She's an ordinary girl.



At the last few days of highschool, a nerdy math-lover named Teta confesses his love to Aria. Aria then finds herself dating Teta.



As they share things with one another, Aria develops deep feelings for Teta even though he isn't that handsome.



During one date, Aria confesses, "Teta. You know, I have a rather weird hobby that nobody knows about."



Teta notices that his girlfriend is about to say something very serious. He smiled and replies, "No matter how strange your hobby is, I still love you okay?"



"Are you sure?"



"Yes."



Aria takes deep breaths. "Actually, I'm very attached to handsome men."



This sends an arrow straight through Teta's chest.



"I can't help myself buying Men's Magazines everyday. There are times when I can't control myself and I even find myself taking pictures of people. And I always wished that my boyfriend would be ridiculously gorgeous."



"But you know Teta," She continues, "When you confessed to me, I immediately thought of rejecting you because you weren't that handsome. But after I got to know you more, I don't care if you're handsome or not, I now know that I can love you just the way you are."



Upon hearing this, Teta stands up, looks away from Aria and says, "Don't come looking for me in 3 months. After 3 months, look for me and you'll find me. Goodbye Aria." And he runs to who knows where.



Aria couldn't find him anywhere.



But where was Teta, who ran like a coward?



Teta had a good friend named Jill. She was strong, athletic, active and stunningly beautiful. This is because she knows all the secrets to beautification. She even works for a fashion magazine company. Teta came to her because he wanted a makeover.



A speedy three month makeover.



~End~



Plot Twists:

-Jill has feelings for Teta since they were kids

-Brutal Gym Workout!!!

-Aria's friend calls up and tells her what's happening to Teta

-Teta gets hired to be a model before the three months

ZenNaari
10-05-2011, 05:03 PM
Makeover Leave

My name is Aria Fellen, and there’s one thing I love.

Handsome men!

I can’t help but waver when I see a new edition of Male Model Magazine or when a local handsome guy walks around town. Whenever I see a good, “catch,” of a handsome guy, I start taking pictures from a distance with my camera that’s always ready with me.

But none of my friends know this side of me. Neither my family nor the guys I take pictures of know about my strange hobby.

I guess one of my abilities is to keep a low-profile of myself.

Aria Fellen, 18 years old and is halfway through finishing the last year of highschool.

Until then, I’ll just drown myself in these handsome guys.

My best friend, Leena, doesn’t know about my secret yet, but we’ve been through ups and downs, and she’s really proven to be my best-friend. I guess if I tell her about my hobby, it would be considered normal but, there are some things that you just want to keep hidden.

Unlike me, Leena is a rich, smart and athletic girl. I’m just average on all levels, except, of course, when it comes to my little obsession.

~~~~

My name is Theta Descartes. Because my name reminds my friends about math, people call me Teta. I don’t see why people don’t like math; I, for one, aced all math-related tests since kindergarten. I’m average on all other subjects though.

There’s a girl I liked since I entered highschool. I don’t really know much about her, but I know that I fell in love with her the first time I saw her. I just know her by her long hair, her quiet nature, and her beautiful smile.

I really do have the courage to confess to her, but there are things that make me feel conscious whenever I try. First of all, I’m ugly. I admitted that fact when I was in grade school. I had no friends back then just because I looked weird. Second, my only ability is doing math. Now, give me an example of a girl who would like someone just for being good at math.

I’m a failure.

Oh, but I have one good friend who stuck with me since grade school. Her name is Jill. Unlike me, she’s an outgoing, athletic and stunningly gorgeous woman. She’s been the school idol since forever. Another one of her traits is that she’s strong. She can lift three treadmills like I can solve two plus two. I don’t have any romantic feelings for her though, probably because this feeling is just being indebted to her for always being a friend to me, an ugly math-lover.

19 years old because my birthday just passed. I’m about to finish my last year in highschool with perfect grades in math-related subjects.

~~~~

My name is Jill Slimmer, an athletic workout fanatic. I’ve been lifting weights since my toddler days. More like, heavy books that I didn’t want to read. I was young and I didn’t know what to do with them, so I just lifted them up and down until they felt like one of my toys.

My dad is a ripped muscleman, and I guess the human tendency to imitate what other humans do applies to why I exercised at a young age. But being able to do a hundred push-ups, sit-ups, and squats in three sets during P.E. freaked everyone out.

My mom, on the other hand, is a beauty specialist. She applied all that she has learned about beauty on me and I can say that I can look in the mirror and tell myself that I’m the most beautiful woman in the world. But because of that, I’ve been hard to approach by people.

Boys would be too shy to talk to me and girls would become very conscious when they’re around me. The truth is that I’m very lonely.

Until the day I met Teta.

It was one day during grade school. I’m not very good at academics, so I sought to ask the nerdy guy in class. At first, I thought he would be startled, but he smiled at and talked to me as if he knew me long ago. He was happy to lend me his notes, give me sample problems, and even teach me how to solve math. In return, I help him with the subjects he’s bad at.

Without knowing it, I’ve used Teta as my key to opening up with others. It’s like, if I can hang out with a nerdy guy, it mustn’t be too hard to approach her.

In middle school, I confessed to him that it feels that way that I’ve been using him. But he patted my head and told me, “It’s okay isn’t it? We’re friends who use each other to build each other up. You’re a good friend to me and you will always be.”

At that moment, I fell in love with him. At that moment, I didn’t want to be just good friends. I wanted to become more that just friends for Teta.

But, I never really got myself to say it. So I ended up just being close to him.

~~~~

We are three people who are completely different on completely different levels. A love story begins that neither one of us will ever forget.

~End~

ZenNaari
10-08-2011, 02:22 PM
Chapter 1

"I know this may be sudden," Says Teta, gathering up all the courage that he can handle, "but I truly feel that I'm in love with you."



He continues, "I may not know your name, but I know that you have long beautiful hair, a quiet nature, and a beautiful smile. And now that it's almost the end of highschool, I don't want to regret this moment. I don't want to lose seeing you everyday. Please let me go out with you!"



Aria stood there speechless. Teta wasn't very good looking. In fact, he was ugly. But she felt something she never felt before in her whole life. It was very different from the feeling she gets taking pictures of handsome men and finding new editions of Men's Model Magazine.



Was it love? She'll never know.



"Well, uhm..." Stutters Aria, blushing and looking away from Teta while playing with her fingers.



Teta sighs after a moment, "Hey. This is really, all very sudden. I'll really be fine with just telling you my feelings." Teta looks away, "I mean, I don't even know your name. I'll just go now."



But before he could sprint...



"Aria!" Aria yells, "M-my name is Aria." She starts to blush more, "I guess that I won't mind," She stutters, "If you went out with me."



Teta looks back, his eyes shining against the sunset, "R-really."



"Hey, it's almost the end of highschool. And I don't want to hurt those feelings you've had for me." Aria looks at Teta purely, "I can't say that I like you yet. But until then, I'm okay with going on dates with you and getting to know you."



Teta felt a bliss. Extreme happiness filled his soul. After a short pause of astonishment he says, "C-can I hug you?"



Aria felt the need to decline, "It's too soon to do that."



"Figured." Teta smiled.



And so starts an ordinary or not-so-ordinary love story wherein who knows what will happen.



-End-